कैसे पराया होने लगा,
ये मेरा अपना घर,
जिन खुशियों मे साथ रहे
अब उनसे ही, हो जाऊँगी बेखबर।
ये कैसी रीत समाज की,
फूलों के गुलिस्तां का एक सुमन,
गया किसी की बगिया महकाने,
हो गया किसी को अर्पण ।
जिस माली ने उसको बोया,
सींचा कितने प्यार से,
पल-पल उसकी रक्षा करता,
धूप,बर्फ ,बौछार से।
उसके आँगन में वो खिलती,
पाती अपनी साख वो,
उसको छोड़ चल दी ,
थामे अजनबी का हाथ वो।
एक विश्वास मन मे लिए,
प्रीत की डोर से बाँधकर,
रहेगी उसकी सुगंध अलौकिक,
रखेगा वो अजनबी सँभालकर ।
जिस आँगन की माटी मे खेली
जहाँ गूँजे हर पल उसकी हँसी ठिठोली,
अचानक कैसे बाबुल को छोड़
साजन की हो ली।
याद आने लगती बरबस,
बाबुल की दुलार भरी बातें,
कुछ तो छूट रहा है मेरा,
जिसको तकती मेरी आँखें।
बिदाई की बेला थी,
मिल रहा था नया जहाँ,
पर मै अकेली थी,
विदा होते होते,
आँखें मेरी भर आई,
बाबुल के आँगन की कली,
आज हो गई थी पराई।
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Ranjeeta, felt emotional reading this one. Every girl can relate to this one!! Very nice:)
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Tysm dear Radhika😊
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वाव——विदा होते होते,आँखें मेरी भर आई,—–मेरी भी—–दिल को छू गया—-अतिसुन्दर——
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Tysm Madhusudan ji😊
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Wow this is so emotional one. Loved it😘
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Thanx dear Veronica😙
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Emotional one Ranjeeta..Sometimes i think how i will face the situation…very heart wrenching moment for every girl.
Btw you are looking beautiful..:))
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Thanx trayee….tumhare blogs ka asar…makeover😂😙
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Ha ha ha :)) so sweet of you..
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Ranjeeta such a beautiful and poignant poem. Each and every girl can relate to this lovely poem of yours with an apt picture too. Super.
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Thank you so much kamal😊
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Welcome Ranjeeta
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Do give me review of my open.mic…m now trying to take my poetry to next level
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Absolutely will do that Ranjeeta.
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सराहनीय रचना भावपूर्ण 👍👍
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Tysm Ajayji😊
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Aaj fir ek Betiya maa ke angne se hui parai, aaj usne bhi yeh reet nibhai aur sasural ko apna ashiyana banake ke duniya ko dikhai…
This is too bad😂😂 sorry for this
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😂😂😂😂
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Sorry! Pure post ka maza kharab kar diya mene😓
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😂😂😂I m still laughing…mere poem ke emotions ki watt laga di
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I am so sorry… Delete it if possible kyuki meri side se nahi ho pa raha 😂😂
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Rehne do…its fun…nothing offensive…need not worry😊
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Arey.. If you feel delete I won’t mind…
Mazak thoda zyada ho gaya😓
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😂😂let it b
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Okay!! Thanks. Agli baar se dhyan rakhunga 😅
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#Excellent_creation
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Thank u so much Faisalji😊
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बिल्कुल सच।
धन्यवाद आपका।
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😊
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very emotional poem
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Thanx Yunus😊
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Welcome mam
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Wow so deep and emotional, the way u expressed it is sooo beautiful …amazing
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Thanx Rohit😊
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बहुत प्यारी कविता है.
लेकिन समाज का – शादी के बाद लड़कियों का “पराई ” होने वाला Concept मुझे नही जंचता है.
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True…but now things r changing Rekhaji😊
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It should change dear.
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वाह
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Thank u Ashwani ji
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Welcome ji…
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very well said G
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Thank you Jai😊
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welcome dear 🙂
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So nice
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Tysm😊
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Where are you from
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Delhi
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M sorry….m here as a blogger…and seriously into writing…
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